Hi there,
I am currently playing through the game for a second time and am reading all of the quests as I go through. I am noticing a lot of typos. I posted an individual thread for a few that I found early in the game a few days ago, but have decided to try to just lay out as many as I can here. I am only about halfway through the game on my second playthrough. If this is not helpful/if there is a better way to get this feedback through, please just let me know. I really like LE and would love to see these errors corrected!
Firstly, we have âthe Brren Aqueductsâ in the quest text. Secondly, the âisâ in âall you found is bloodâ should be âwasâ.
I noticed this in my first post, but travelled continues to be spelled in different ways throughout the game. I donât know if it would be helpful to point all these out. But there is one spelled âtravelledâ here.
In the quest text: âDuring your search, you were attacked by an enormous found a huge scorpionâŚâ
Suggested: ââŚyou were attacked by an enormous scorpionâŚâ
âthe aspirations on manâ should be âof manâ
âwere goingâ should be âweâre goingâ
âat first I thought it was a sweetâ. A sweet gift?
âThe stranger that you met at the second artificial waypoint she said that sheâŚâ --repeated âsheâ
âmake your way to dock to boardâ should be âto the dock to boardâ. The ship should probably also be âinâ the harbor rather than âatâ.
ââŚhas long been lost to centuries of cruelty he has shownâ should be ââŚto the centuries of crueltyâŚâ
These are just the most glaring and indisputable errors I have found. There are also lots of comma splices and other minor grammar errors in the text, which altogether make a list too long to post in this forum, I think. Is this the best medium to provide this feedback? I hope this helps. If it does, Iâll post through the rest of the major errors I find as I finish off the game. Again, big fan of LE and just trying to help!
Cheers.
Mol