Hey again, here is the haul of typos I found from the second half of the game, up to the Monolith of Fate. I’ve tried to limit myself to straight up typographical errors, rather than grammar/clarity edits.
Also, just as the Traveler/Traveller is the protagonist of the game, they’re also the protagonist of this UI typo hunt it would seem. I’ve noted one of the inconsistent uses of traveler (traveler’s shrine) here, but I have six others that I might just upload in a separate document, or I’m hoping that you can just ctrl-f that one. Cheers.
“traveler’s shrine”
“…and they’re all saying they say saw you…” --remove “say”
“…she agreed to cooperative with you…” --should be “cooperate with you”
“…I was enjoying this journey of him…” Not sure what is meant by “of” him here. There are also two comma splices in this text. “I can feel it, his presence is waning”, and, “Let’s go, the Lance is inside this giant tree.” I’m not sure if comma splices are a thing you care about. If so, I found another 30-odd as I was going through, but they seem too difficult to point out in this format.
https://i.imgur.com/j1ktkZ2.jpg
the “an” in “…two leaders: An Invasion Commander” shouldn’t be capitalised.
https://i.imgur.com/op5MBrc.jpg
“blessed horn” in the quest checklist should be capitalised to match the style in the quest description.
“…my harshness earlier, Thetima has been getting…” There’s a splice and a tense error here. It should probably read, “…my harshness earlier; Thetima had been getting…”
“She suggests that you find a way” should be “She suggested”, I believe, though I couldn’t quite tell if the tense was changing in line with the quest developing; whatever the case it is certainly incorrect once the quest is in its final state.
I hope it has been helpful for me to go through and point these out. The spirit I am coming in with is that typos are annoying and have nothing to do with anyone’s ability to write or do anything, and these are not criticisms, just some help.
All the best and lots of love,
Mollee